Ideas for final cut

The feedback that I received from my target audience was invaluable, the scoring system has also made it very clear which areas of the project need work.

The main point that came across is that I should cut off the ending and so I will finish on the shot which shows the blood trickling away on the pavement. I will also add more of the beats at points that will better build suspense.

Look out for the final cut of 'Free House'