Final Cut: Free House

Ideas for final cut

The feedback that I received from my target audience was invaluable, the scoring system has also made it very clear which areas of the project need work.

The main point that came across is that I should cut off the ending and so I will finish on the shot which shows the blood trickling away on the pavement. I will also add more of the beats at points that will better build suspense.

Look out for the final cut of 'Free House'

Preview Feedback

I have broken the feedback down into categories below and have put underneath each subtitle the most valuable and relevant feedback from my target audience group which consisted of ten teenagers (15-19). I also asked my Previewers to give each section a score out of ten so I know what needs the most improvement, below I have averaged the scores.

Music:

The beats should have been on every title to build suspense more.

Overall choice of music suited genre.

9/10

Storyline:

Main plot was good but ending was poor and unclear.

Great story, could have stopped earlier at a more suspenseful time, eg after stabbing.

7/10

Camera work:

Good variety of camera angles, displayed the action well.

9/10

Titles:

Font suited Genre.

Loved the gory titles!! set the scene well.

10/10

Editing:

Good editing, seamless.

Editing was done well, possibly should have cut off the ending.

8/10